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Ask Fleur — BNI Referral Script (08 Jun 2026)

Small Business & Not-for-Profit Coaching
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Provocative Style
Generated 08 Jun 2026

Ask Fleur — Helping experienced small business owners and NFP leaders break through growth plateaus without burnout.

Grow your business without overwhelm through personalised coaching and community support

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Leanne, the Plateaued Business Owner

42-48 years old, small business owner or NFP leader, $80k-$150k income, established in role for 5+ years

1 The Situation

Has built a successful small business or leads an established NFP but feels stuck at the same revenue level for 2+ years. Working harder but not seeing proportional growth. Team is small but feels chaotic.

2 Pain History

Tried DIY online courses that felt too generic. Hired a business coach 18 months ago who promised quick wins but delivered cookie-cutter advice. Spent $8k on marketing automation that sits unused. Attended networking events that felt like time-wasters.

3 Emotional State

Quietly frustrated and wondering if she's hit her ceiling. Feels like she should have it all figured out by now but is embarrassed to admit she's struggling. Tired of being the bottleneck in her own business.

4 Their Vocabulary

business coaching Perth, sustainable business growth, small business mentor, overwhelmed business owner, business accountability groups, how to grow without burnout, business coach for established businesses

5 Trigger Moment

Just finished another 60-hour week where she personally handled three different crises that her team should have managed. Realized she's working harder than when she started but taking home less profit per hour.

30s

30-Second Script

~75 words

Most successful business coaches are actually killing their clients' businesses. They push growth tactics that create burnout and chaos. I'm Fleur Allen from Ask Fleur, and I help established business owners who've hit a revenue plateau build sustainable systems instead of just working harder. Last month, a client increased profit by 40% while cutting her hours in half. I'd love to meet anyone at Small Business Development Corporation who knows business owners stuck despite their success.
🎤 Delivery Notes

  • Pause after the opening bomb
  • Emphasize 'sustainable systems' vs working harder
  • Slow down on the specific numbers
45s

45-Second Script

~110 words

Here's an uncomfortable truth: most business coaching advice is designed for startups, not established businesses. And it's quietly destroying profitable companies. I'm Fleur Allen from Ask Fleur. I work exclusively with business owners and NFP leaders who've been successful for years but feel trapped at the same revenue level. They're working 60-hour weeks, personally handling crises their teams should manage, and wondering if they've hit their ceiling. One client told me she felt like a prisoner in the business she built. We changed that. I'd love to connect with anyone at Small Business Development Corporation.
🎤 Delivery Notes

  • Land the truth bomb with conviction
  • Paint the prison analogy visually
  • Genuine warmth on the client story
60s

60-Second Script

~150 words

The dirty secret of business coaching? Most of it is designed for desperate beginners, not successful business owners. And when established businesses try those tactics, they create expensive chaos. I'm Fleur Allen from Ask Fleur. I work with business owners and NFP leaders who've built something real but feel completely stuck. Picture this: you're working harder than when you started, putting out fires your team should handle, taking home less profit per hour than three years ago. You've spent thousands on generic courses and cookie-cutter coaching. Sound familiar? Meet Leanne. She was doing exactly this until we rebuilt her systems properly. Now she's increased profit by 40% while working 20 fewer hours per week. I'd love to connect with anyone at Small Business Development Corporation who encounters successful business owners feeling trapped by their own success.
🎤 Delivery Notes

  • Drop 'dirty secret' like insider knowledge
  • Make the 'Picture this' moment visceral and personal
  • Deliver Leanne's results as transformation, not just numbers

Use these three tiers in your BNI presentation — start with Tier 1 and work down if members don’t have that specific contact.

1 Best Case

This week I am looking to be introduced to the CEO at Small Business Development Corporation.

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🌐 www.smallbusiness.wa.gov.au
2 Failing That…

Failing that, I’d love to be introduced to the Executive Director at any Not-for-profit organization with annual revenue $500k-$2M.

3 Worst Case

At worst, I’m looking for any Business Owner of any Small business based in Subiaco, Perth.

⚡ Power Phrases

Drop these into conversation to signal you understand their world.

  • I feel like I'm working harder but not getting ahead
  • My business has hit a plateau and I don't know how to break through
  • I'm tired of being the bottleneck in my own business
  • I need accountability but not cookie-cutter advice
  • I want to grow without burning out my team or myself

🔔 Referral Triggers

Share these so members know when to think of Ask Fleur.

  • Business owner complaining about working 60+ hour weeks with flat revenue
  • NFP leader struggling with donor engagement and team burnout
  • Someone mentioning they feel stuck at the same business level for years
  • Business owner frustrated with generic business advice that doesn't work
  • Leader looking for accountability and community with other professionals

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Deliver with Enthusiasm

Energy is contagious. The room will feel exactly as excited about your referral as you are. Stand tall, speak up, and mean every word.

Use the STOP Technique

Stop speaking. Make direct eye contact with one person. Deliver a single thought directly to them. Pause. Then move to the next person. Never spray the whole room at once.

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One Thought. One Person.

Deliver each sentence or idea to a different individual in the room. This makes every member feel personally spoken to and dramatically increases the chance they’ll act on your referral ask.

Your 60-Second Script — Key Lines Breakdown


Opening Hook — Get them leaning in
  • The dirty secret of business coaching? Most of it is designed for desperate beginners, not successful business owners.
  • And when established businesses try those tactics, they create expensive chaos.

Deliver the Key Message — Make them feel it
  • Successful business owners feeling trapped by their own success
  • 40% profit increase while working 20 fewer hours per week
  • I work exclusively with established businesses, not startups

Closing Referral Request — Make it specific and memorable
  • I'd love to connect with anyone at
  • Small Business Development Corporation who encounters successful business owners feeling trapped by their own success

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About Fleur Allen

Fleur Allen is the founder of Ask Fleur and a Certified Business Coach with over 15 years of experience. She helps small business owners, business development managers, and not-for-profit leaders achieve sustainable growth through evidence-based coaching, practical strategy, and community support. Fleur is also a Certified Success Principles Trainer and CFRE Fundraising Executive.

Business coaching Perth for small business owners and not-for-profit leaders seeking sustainable growth strategies

Disclaimer: This content was generated to provide possible examples for BNI Members and the scenarios provided are not real. Members can use ideas from this to structure their own presentation.

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